Eng 101

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“I read two articles in English Classes last week. One of them is “Is Music Piracy Stealing?” which is written by Charles W. Moore and the other one is “The Copycat Syndrome Plagiarists at work” which is created by Meghan O’Rourke. I will be referring the first one as Text A, and the second one as Text B. They have some points which differentiate them, contrary to the similarities. Text A is about the piracy which is downloading music from Internet without paying any money. On the other hand, Meghan O’Rourke mentions about the plagiarism, in other words “stealing someone’s work without referring anything to the owner”. Moreover, both texts are perceived as their contents are the stealing issue. However there is a line between the types and usage of the stealing. Furthermore, students or authors or artists plagiarize. Their aim can be to escape from a challenging work or to use an enchanting piece to have a better reputation in the end. As it is discussed in Text B, a student copies down the work of a hardworking friend of him, and he receives an A. If he had given the one that he wrote, he would get a C. Contrary to that, music piracy is just getting music from somewhere especially from the Internet just to listen to music free of charge. Referring to Text A, “Personally music piracy is not a big part of my life. Like many people with a computer and an Internet hookup, I experimented with downloading MP3s during the Napster era, but didn’t do a whole lot of it, and I think in the past two years I’ve downloaded a grand total of two songs, while testing file-sharing client software for review.” as the author declares that he just does that just to have some pleasant time. In short, people download the music for themselves not to use them for profit or economical incomes like the individuals who copy someone’s work of art. To be honest, both are stealing, however their purposes are totally different. To exemplify, I downloaded a song of Justin Timberlake from the sharing software programs. If I just listen and have fun with it, this is called music piracy. On the other hand, if I use the song, as if its mine, and make a CD then sell this CD to the people with my name under it and without taking any permission from Justin Timberlake, this time it is called plagiarism. This thin line creates a huge distinction between them. To sum up, the topics of Text A and Text B sound similar to each other at first, however you realize that they are divergent, after having analyzed the both texts.”

1-yes he understood the question and give true answers to question

2-thesis statement is simple short and there is no certain thesis sentence

3-ı can not highlight because it is not certain

4-there is no page number in essay

5-yes quotation is used but it is not analysed and they fit into paragragh

7-Sub arguments have supported but not developed and examplified much

8-yes thesis is reworded in conclusion

9-language is academic but style is not academic

10-I think grammar help communication of writers ideas

11-One of it is used in essay

12-there is no reference list